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- Go to a poem i wrote about 11yrs. ago when i was being stalked(yes,really)...
excellent.
posted by
scriber
on April 11, 2006 at 8:48 AM
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thanks so much to everyone for reading
i'm new to this whole blogging thing and your comments are truly making me want to write more - its the little push i've been needing.
posted by
katep
on April 6, 2006 at 1:39 PM
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I'm with Layla
I would say there's nothing to change. First impulses and instincts are often correct. Following this up with a post which would fill in the background is a great idea. You've tweaked my interest with this unique poem, so I'd come back and read the story, too...
posted by
Lensman
on April 6, 2006 at 12:27 PM
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It gave me chills...
DO NOT change a thing!!! I love it.
~LB~ xoxo
posted by
Anony_Miss
on April 6, 2006 at 12:18 PM
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thanks for reading my work
I like the way you view yourself as predator and prey. It is so true.
posted by
thelonelyroad
on April 6, 2006 at 12:17 PM
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about the ending...
some people think its cheesy, other seem to feel that like the rest of the poem it is disturbing. Should I change it? What do you think?
Also, if you want to hear the story about the stalker let me know and i'll write about it. it really has some funny elements to it and might be something that those of you who have kids in college might want to share with them as a warning that it can happen to anyone.
thanks for reading,
katep
posted by
katep
on April 6, 2006 at 10:40 AM
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