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katep, both of these are (should I use that old retread?) Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 6, 2006 at 7:02 AM
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Very nice ... looking forward to more
vpate
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 5, 2006 at 11:08 PM
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Katep--- I enjoyed these, especially the visceral imagery.
posted by
Jazwolf
on April 5, 2006 at 10:15 PM
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I like your poems. The first one is really impressive.
I am glad, that somebody put into the list of favorite books " Steppenwolf". It is my favorite, too. Welcome to "Blogit".
posted by
shypettite
on April 5, 2006 at 9:15 PM
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Kate, I liked the first one too, I thought it flowed very melodically.
posted by
Jomei
on April 5, 2006 at 8:06 PM
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Katep,
Being heard, seen, witnessed in a love relationship seems to me to be the essence of love. I love how you've portrayed the jar breaking.
posted by
Blanche.
on April 5, 2006 at 5:42 PM
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I like the first one best. The jar image made it live for me.
Thought I recognized your blogging name, but it turns out you're new. Welcome.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on April 5, 2006 at 5:18 PM
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Wow, well done! Welcome to Blogit!
posted by
Ariala
on April 5, 2006 at 12:54 PM
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