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Wow guys,
and I waited to post it til one of the last ones, because I wasn't sure I even liked it. Thanks so much.
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KrystalDMonroe
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April 6, 2006
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You combine the sweetness of dream-filled longing
with the eloquent language of love's deepest passions to create a masterful poem in CLOSE TO MY HEART. An extraordinary and beautiful reading experience.
Aberjhani
posted by
Aberjhani
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April 5, 2006
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Krystal, I wonder whether you've ever considered this - probably not, as we often don't take a close analytical look at the writing that comes direct from our heart - but your poetry operates with a huge amount of calming sibillance, shushing the soul as the reader reads. And this combines with assonance galore to soothe the reader and create a sea-shore of lapping waves on the sound receptors of the reader's imagination.
Design or innate talent, it does the job on me. I feel serene when I've read one.
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April 5, 2006
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