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Wow guys,
and I waited to post it til one of the last ones, because I wasn't sure I even liked it. Thanks so much.

posted by KrystalDMonroe on April 6, 2006 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

You combine the sweetness of dream-filled longing

with the eloquent language of love's deepest passions to create a masterful poem in CLOSE TO MY HEART.  An extraordinary and beautiful reading experience.

Aberjhani

posted by Aberjhani on April 5, 2006 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Krystal, I wonder whether you've ever considered this - probably not, as we often don't take a close analytical look at the writing that comes direct from our heart - but your poetry operates with a huge amount of calming sibillance, shushing the soul as the reader reads. And this combines with assonance galore to soothe the reader and create a sea-shore of lapping waves on the sound receptors of the reader's imagination.

Design or innate talent, it does the job on me. I feel serene when I've read one.

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