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Muser--- Thanks so much for stopping by.

posted by Jazwolf on May 1, 2006 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

I can just see you poor Mom, Jazwolf, trapped under the dining room table
with Tootie flying about. You portrayed quite a scene with Tootie saying what your Mom was probably thinking! I think Dave's idea is stellar!

posted by muser on April 30, 2006 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply

This is such human (and bird) story
I have an elderly cousin who has a terror of feathers. She is a wonderful cook in the old fashioned way of baking cakes. I thought it might be nice to bring her a cloth for her table. I found one with birds on on it. Much later she told me about her feather phobia

posted by Azur on April 21, 2006 at 1:41 PM | link to this | reply

Jazwolf - Of course I gave you an "of course". It isn't easy writing among
professionals writers / authors and commenting on their posts. Very intimidating.

posted by blogflogger on April 20, 2006 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Ms. Flogger--- Love that "of course."

posted by Jazwolf on April 20, 2006 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

Jazwolf - What a great tale! I somehow missed this one in March. Hm.
Your poor mom. - Your balance between affection for the bird, understanding your mom, and humor at the situation is perfect (of course).

posted by blogflogger on April 20, 2006 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

Unc--- Yes, it seems to be working well. Great idea of yours. Thanks.

posted by Jazwolf on April 20, 2006 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

Katray--- Thanks very much. Glad that you survived the wasp.

posted by Jazwolf on April 20, 2006 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

A-G--- I think that you're right. Sadly, some people refuse to be healed
because they are comfortable in their circumstance.

posted by Jazwolf on April 20, 2006 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

Jaz
I liked this story immensely. It seems as though Tootie was attempting to heal your mother's fears, but was unsuccessful.

posted by avant-garde on April 19, 2006 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply

I arrived here from Uncle Dave's Showcase
Thoroughly enjoyable post. Your poor mother and Tootie must have been rather bewildered. ;) One little wasp caused me to have a wreck a few years ago.

posted by PoetRaye on April 19, 2006 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

Jaz, just checking in to see how the showcase is working for you. Seems
it's going well. I think Tapsie's statement says a lot. Despite the best efforts of any reader, it's easy to miss out on a special post.  See you around.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on April 19, 2006 at 2:26 AM | link to this | reply

Jazwolf
This is great.  Thanks for placing it in the showcase.   I missed it the first time around.

posted by TAPS. on April 13, 2006 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

Dhayen--- Thanks. Glad that you enjoyed it.

posted by Jazwolf on April 13, 2006 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

Tanree--- You're right. Sometimes the smallest of choices can evolve
into huge impacts.

posted by Jazwolf on April 13, 2006 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Very funny
Read it yesterday but forgot to leave a message.

posted by dhayen on April 12, 2006 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Great story. It is ironic how people handle circumstances so differently. It makes you wonder how different your life might be if youchanged some of the little choices. Even little choices can have huge impact!

posted by Tanree on April 12, 2006 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply

Vickip--- I agree! Great comment.

posted by Jazwolf on April 12, 2006 at 3:34 PM | link to this | reply

Too bad no one had taught Tootie to say
"touche! touche!".... lol  Great story ...

posted by VictoriaP on April 12, 2006 at 3:14 PM | link to this | reply

Shypettite--- Thanks for reading.

posted by Jazwolf on April 12, 2006 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply

Una--- We share that mystery. I do not understand her either.

posted by Jazwolf on April 12, 2006 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

I LOVE!!! this story
though I cannot understand your mother.

posted by una01 on April 12, 2006 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

Great work!!!

posted by shypettite on April 11, 2006 at 10:18 PM | link to this | reply

Captain--- Insightful observation. Actually, that paraellel (and irony)
did occur to me after I had written of the experience. One of the fascinating things that I've discovered about writing, at least for myself, is that I learn about such things as I write and afterward, instead of realizing what's going on first and then deciding to write about it. I didn't word that very well. I hope that it makes sense.

posted by Jazwolf on April 11, 2006 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

Brettnik--- Good idea! Actually, I'm a non-violent person, but I do believe
in defending oneself (and loved ones) from kamikaze chickens.

posted by Jazwolf on April 11, 2006 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Jazwolf
I read this one the first time around, but missed the punting rooster image completely!  Great timing in this piece.  Maybe you should submit it to PETA for an upcoming issue!

posted by brettnik on April 11, 2006 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

Jaz: Who had who in a cage?

Perhaps you intended this, but I love the irony that in the end it was your poor mother caged under the table, captured by a bird. 

Hummm...caged by her own fears...

interesting.  LOL...actually, it's brilliant the longer I ponder this relationship between captor and captive!

posted by Captain_Gulliver on April 11, 2006 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely work, Jaz. Couldn't help coming for a sneak preview ahead of linking
it in the showcase. That picture of the patrol and the prison really had me full of mirth. Good post.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on April 10, 2006 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony--- Thanks for reading my humor attempt. Wish that more had
checked it out  to learn about the fiend named "Tootie."

posted by Jazwolf on March 28, 2006 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

hehehe this was great - thanks for sharing...

posted by _Symphony_ on March 28, 2006 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

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