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shypettite and Teddy, thank you!!

posted by Ariala on March 26, 2006 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, this one I like, a lot.

posted by shypettite on March 25, 2006 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

Southern
how often I have stood in those same fields and felt the same exhilarating rush of all things around me...So well done!   

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 25, 2006 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

Jomei, I can't see my shadow...I'm a freakin vampire, remember?

posted by Ariala on March 25, 2006 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

So did`Ariala see her shadow?? Lucky you're not plump or I could make
a few nasty jokes here LOL

posted by Jomei on March 24, 2006 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

Jomei, they do look like groundhogs...so cute!

posted by Ariala on March 24, 2006 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

hmmm, a lemming??

posted by Jomei on March 24, 2006 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

Jomei, this was different, yes...it's an old poem...glad you enjoyed it.

I talk to the hawks all the time when I see them...I see them daily...they are so fat and fluffy.  I love em!

As for guides, well, you know I don't buy into all that, LOL  Still, what animal do you think would be my guide?  A bat?  LOL

posted by Ariala on March 24, 2006 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

Ari, this was nice! It seemed to be a bit of a change of tempo to

your usual style, no??

I love hawks and eagles, it sounds corny but I really think they are my guides (like every new ager has an eagle for their totem these days LOL)

posted by Jomei on March 24, 2006 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

SansEra, hmmm...not sure what that means...but thanks for the visit?

posted by Ariala on March 24, 2006 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

shelly, thanks!

posted by Ariala on March 24, 2006 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

Sand Flies
Lovely poem, but -, In a 'Sand Hills Crane poem', the beautiful scene looks down at the sand flies eating on the cranes legs.

posted by SansEra on March 24, 2006 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful Ariala!

posted by shelly_b on March 24, 2006 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

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