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posted by shypettite on April 15, 2006 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

hungry

The first poem made me hungry for fruit!:) It seems you have a natural talent!

posted by microba on April 3, 2006 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

poetjpb,

Great post!  This is goodbye, I'm leaving Blogit. 

April Fools!

Have a great weekend!

posted by MandaLee on April 1, 2006 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

poetjpb

Wiley Visited

posted by WileyJohn on March 31, 2006 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

thanks all

posted by poetjpb on March 30, 2006 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

poet,

I love your posts. Thank you for sharing!

posted by ms_bradrock on March 15, 2006 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply

poetjpb

This is you, so engaging, loved them both.

posted by WileyJohn on March 13, 2006 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

poet

We live near apple orchards. I really like going there during harvest. Your poem revivified those fond memories.

posted by avant-garde on March 13, 2006 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

Really liked both of

these pieces. Good thoughts and word pictures.

posted by Moondawg on March 12, 2006 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

Positively so Poet!

Then how grand to come home and write about all that was seen, heard and smelled. Well, maybe not smelled, lol.

Excellent pieces both ~ Outer skins shed and abandoned do evoke thoughts of lonely grounds.

posted by PoetRaye on March 12, 2006 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

posted by poetjpb on March 12, 2006 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

3rd graders art

posted by poetjpb on March 12, 2006 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

MANY, MANY TIMES in my life I have hungered to be

invisible, and I still do from time to time.

posted by brettnik on March 12, 2006 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

jpb

both are really good illustrations...I have experienced buying the entire cartload as well as the empty pockets of fleshless denim...hmmm...shades of a secret hunger to roam the crowds unseen?  

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 12, 2006 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

yes... I do also.

posted by -blackcat on March 12, 2006 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Ariala on March 12, 2006 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

poetjpb

Yes I do!!!

posted by Nanaroo on March 12, 2006 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply