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posted by
poetjpb
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February 24, 2006
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Dear Lady, in response to an earlier posting of yours
I wrote a poem and would like to place it here as well. I know well the darkness of which you speak.
Absolutely great post; truly enlightening and informative. In writing this you show the courage which unfortunately is beaten down in so many instances...Superbly done. From my Heart, Good Lady.
If only...
tremors
apprehensions
did anyone see him holding his arm
as if to quell the beast
writhing within
how many years spent hiding
if they find out
who will he turn to
in his manner of half sentences
and thought train derailment
oh how desperately
he wants to share his burden
but the stigma
the demon stigma
would surely devour his world
So well done, uncanny illustration of a desperate hell on Earth.
posted by
_teddypoet_
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February 24, 2006
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A true story of a survivor, your strength shows through!
posted by
anglofinspirtion
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February 24, 2006
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12:41 PM
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Sad things in life...well-written.
posted by
Original_Influence
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February 24, 2006
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7:11 AM
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