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beautifully done! I know that feeling after this morning!
posted by
Ariala
on November 28, 2006 at 7:45 AM
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Now I understand, Blance, you are either retired
a stay home mother, self-employed or financially set. In any case, it must be a nice place to be, for I am not there yet!
posted by
MountainClimber57
on February 6, 2006 at 5:08 PM
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MC,
I just meant that the gist of your poem as I understood it was the feeling of running behind, waking up feeling "late". I have the luxury of not having to keep a full schedule.
posted by
Blanche.
on February 6, 2006 at 5:06 PM
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Blanche, I am not sure what you mean, "not having to chase
the sun." I woul like to hear more, and I look forward to reading more of your work!
posted by
MountainClimber57
on February 6, 2006 at 5:04 PM
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MountainClimber56,
I'm very fortunate that at this time, I don't need to chase the sun, but can enjoy watching it. I hope your Day Runner is not running over!
posted by
Blanche.
on February 6, 2006 at 5:01 PM
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Teddypoet, I like the poetic version of your comments. Thank You!
posted by
MountainClimber57
on February 6, 2006 at 4:28 PM
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Very nice!
rise
O sun of suns
slip long across meadows
deep into shelter of shadows
rise
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 6, 2006 at 3:41 PM
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Shestrongyah, Thank you for reading and your kind words of comment!
posted by
MountainClimber57
on February 6, 2006 at 10:14 AM
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Beautiful piece... glad for you sister.
I love your poetry.
posted by
shestrongyah
on February 6, 2006 at 10:03 AM
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