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It is an Honour

I am so intrigued with your work of poetry. I know it is full of love and pain. I understand this through the reading of your poetic words. A sensational piece of art work to be displayed for all to see. I look forward to reading more works of art produced by you. WOW!!

posted by qutiepie58 on February 13, 2006 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

WOW

I felt your words...they cut both ways. Wish I'd had your magic way with words earlier in life when I fumbled and stumbled trying to say these words and made a bumbling fool of myself. Wonderful masterpiece

posted by ALWAYSALOVER on February 7, 2006 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

Hi

I think this was an absolutely beautiful poem. It's more than obvious there is pain in it, but the way you express it really makes me feel it as well. Thank You for posting this.

posted by Shirmarnel on February 7, 2006 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

Read with heartfelt understanding

A moving account of a painful experience that I relate to 100%!  I hope you showed his sorry ass the door!

posted by Born2Bfree on February 7, 2006 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

Hi,

Using pictures with the poems is always powerful. Great work.

posted by fionajean on February 6, 2006 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

Promises.

Dear Rafika... You are right. Promises are always empty, always invisible until it is fulfilled...Prof

posted by PROF-SUMAKEL33 on February 5, 2006 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply

I feel the pain here. Baring your soul is something that others can understand and relate to. While many are voyeurs or even enjoy the suffering of others; many more care and lift you up in prayer.

posted by magic_moon on February 5, 2006 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply