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Restlessness envelpoes me

Good write

posted by Kat02 on May 20, 2006 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

hiiii

restlessness.....i wish you must have overcome it when you wrote this.nice poem.

posted by abhilasha on January 31, 2006 at 3:03 AM | link to this | reply

You have poetized restlessness very well. Great job! BTW -- I agree

that western and eastern cultures are not absolutes and have shades of one another in each. Thanks for the comment.

posted by Jomei on January 28, 2006 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Seeking and finding

Nice, thoughtful work Straightforward.

posted by PoetRaye on January 26, 2006 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply

Straightforward--as long as you're not bored.

posted by scriber on January 23, 2006 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Good questions all

Good poem.  Clear, direct, honest, revealing and has an easy flow from beginning to end.

posted by rafika on January 22, 2006 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply

This illustration speaks such a heavy truth!

posted by _teddypoet_ on January 22, 2006 at 9:44 AM | link to this | reply

I get that frequently. You certainly captured the feeling. Good work.

posted by magic_moon on January 22, 2006 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

Straightforward

Great post. Enjoy reading yours.

posted by StillStayEileenD on January 22, 2006 at 2:46 AM | link to this | reply