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Very nice..
I really enjoy your poetry, I love the way it tells a story..Keep on writing...
posted by
steeler_fan
on February 19, 2006 at 3:37 AM
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Hope you dont mind my comment but the poem drew me in and I
couldnt resist:
Lines I would change:
She walked her fingers through my ears
as I closed my eyes....
..... I had no reactions...
Lines I absolutely adore:
I may not deserve a place here
and relinquished my right to ask of you;
she does have something that I like
and you something I love.
I love your writing:), peace, meringue.
posted by
Meringue
on January 16, 2006 at 6:04 PM
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Fantastic piece of work, Mike!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 16, 2006 at 4:06 PM
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