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enjoyed it
thanks for the read, I love the flow and a lovely ending
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restlessriver
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January 17, 2006
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Ebb
Great work.
posted by
avant-garde
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January 16, 2006
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Perfect Flow
You can't help but get caught up in this one. Love the flow, keep it going.
posted by
Eyevory
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January 16, 2006
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Excellent writing
Great imagery, good rhythm and rhyme, nice flow, and extraordinary passionate vision.
posted by
rafika
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January 15, 2006
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Genius, pure GENIUS! I Love this poem! Well done!!! you are amazing!
(Should I go on? :-) There are two or three lines that stumble a little, but this poem is truely amazing.
posted by
cordwainer
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January 15, 2006
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ebb...
powerful, colorful poem. Very good.
posted by
bwFrampton
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January 15, 2006
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