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Your poetry, like your love, is so beautiful.

posted by magic_moon on January 15, 2006 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

Very strong.... difficult rhyme scheme and some of the last lines were very effectively placed.

I really like "an intimate harangue in silence"

posted by Trevor_Cunnington on January 15, 2006 at 7:41 PM | link to this | reply

In my humble opinion, this is some of your best work! keep 'em coming.

-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on January 15, 2006 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

Glad you took the time to check it out.

posted by rafika on January 14, 2006 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

and the poetic imagery evoked by it is equally hot!

posted by Ebb.and.Flow on January 14, 2006 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

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