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Rafika, your words carried me right along in a pleasant stream of feelings and thought.

posted by TAPS. on January 9, 2006 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

very poignant, and I identify with it:)

posted by Meringue on January 9, 2006 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

rafika the poetic side of what is unsaid when lovers part. Very moving.

posted by scriber on January 9, 2006 at 3:34 PM | link to this | reply

This is an excellent work of poetry, Rafika.  I hope to read more!!...

posted by lovelyladymonk on January 9, 2006 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

LOVELY work!

I got a kick out of your "about me" page.  I wish I could be a globe-trotter!  You GO, girl!  :-)  ~LB~ xo

posted by Anony_Miss on January 9, 2006 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Hello,

Reading your poetry makes me feel better - I like "The Parting" very much - it is an excellent poem. I can appreciate it, maybe because I broke up with my ex.. 3 months ago, and I still remember the pain, though now I am happy again. Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Greetings from Poland.

posted by mira1 on January 9, 2006 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, what a moving piece!

posted by MandaLee on January 9, 2006 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

Wow...what a romantic poem.

I usually do not understand poems and I'm not a good critic but I loved yours.  It made me want to be the recipient.

posted by meeshe4 on January 9, 2006 at 4:36 AM | link to this | reply

Piquant

and poignant.

posted by avant-garde on January 9, 2006 at 4:19 AM | link to this | reply

THE PARTING

MAGIC..YOUR WORDS

posted by lily5 on January 9, 2006 at 2:15 AM | link to this | reply

I like the pic you put along with your poem...

very beautiful

posted by Marshallengraved on January 9, 2006 at 12:53 AM | link to this | reply

so wonderfully written...

you really are a star at this poetry business...

posted by Temple on January 8, 2006 at 10:52 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poetry, Rafika,

Thanks for sharing...

posted by ms_bradrock on January 8, 2006 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Flowing words and flowing water. Drowning in a sea of emotion.

posted by ThomasFranklin on January 8, 2006 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply

Returning a blog visit...

So very glad I did. Nice work... both the photos and the poetry.

posted by Transcendental_Child on January 8, 2006 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

beautifully romantic

The beauty and warmth of romance fill every line of this poem with raw passion.
Aberjhani

posted by Aberjhani on January 8, 2006 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful expression of intense love and longing. Thank you for the gift of your poetry.

posted by magic_moon on January 8, 2006 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, blackcat

Glad you could appreciate the prose.

posted by rafika on January 8, 2006 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

wow... I can relate to that one. Nicely done!

posted by -blackcat on January 8, 2006 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply