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poetjpb
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January 9, 2006
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intimate and enlightening
i love reading your works, you are a very seductive, and thoughtful woman . i hate to admit it, but some of your poems create sensuous flames in my soul.( make me horny) luv ya
posted by
number11
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January 8, 2006
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Thanks!
I appreciate your comments, Trevor and Ca88andra. You seemed to "get" the poem easily. That's great.
posted by
rafika
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January 7, 2006
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very sonorous
like the way touching sounds with erupt in the next line; also liked how hymn and yearn sound in the same line.
posted by
Trevor_Cunnington
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January 6, 2006
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Lovely choice of words!
posted by
Ca88andra
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January 6, 2006
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