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I wrote on this green monster today for another site. Nice work!
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Ariala
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January 5, 2006
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yeah... curator... that's a shade we don't like to linger in for long....
thanks for stopping by...
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
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January 5, 2006
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muser
I suspected that was what you meant! But I am glad you clarified the point... it is better to be sure than to suspect and wonder.
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Ebb.and.Flow
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January 5, 2006
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Ah.
I think you would have to have lived through that particular lovers' envy to fully see that shade of green. I remember, though I'm glad I won't be going back there! Thanks for this lovely haiku.
posted by
curator
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January 5, 2006
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cordwainer
thanks for stopping by... glad you enjoy my Haiku
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
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January 5, 2006
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Ebb, I made a huge mistake.... Correction - I hope your God given
creativity will NEVER ebb...but always FLOW!
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muser
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January 5, 2006
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Is the color of envy included in those forty shades of green? Once again,
you've written a poem that communicates with me! This one shows me a
shade of green I've never before seen. I know what envy is...I've seen
it demonstrated...but I've never seen the color of it ...untl today. I
hope your God given creativity will ever ebb, Ebb.and.Flow!
posted by
muser
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January 5, 2006
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I love shades of green--
Moss often sings in my poems, too. Nice haiku, though personally I like green moss better than envy.
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cordwainer
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January 5, 2006
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