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Thank you
it is hard to see your own work from the outside. I'll have a reread in that the light of your thoughts.
Glad you are enjoying,
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on January 6, 2006 at 7:37 PM
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hey.
Nicely written. I especially liked the touch about the gulls drowning her voice out. Very poignant. I found his internal monologue a little delayed in the situation, it seemed out of place, but perhaps this is to convey to the reader his own disorientation.
posted by
Trevor_Cunnington
on January 6, 2006 at 6:59 PM
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BrisbaneArtist
Hi.. I've been having fun for so long that I'll have to go back to the beginning and if you don't mind.. can I print this out to read while sitting in my easy chair? I hope this year will be good to you! 
posted by
BrightIrish
on January 4, 2006 at 8:02 PM
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Why did bad things happen to the recovering addict? Interesting!
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on January 4, 2006 at 2:26 PM
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