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Reminds me of that song,
'Peace in the Valley'.  I think it's a hymn or something.  You really have to make them kill you or they would just add more time on.  Is it even punishment if you have nothing but a pulse?  Great little piece

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on January 11, 2006 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

ThomasFranklin, I can feel his need to try no matter what.

posted by TAPS. on January 3, 2006 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

Passionflower
Its true. These are the writings of my best friend who is referred to as 'The Hat'. There are several people who now post on this blog although we are all alike. Thanks for commenting.

posted by ThomasFranklin on January 3, 2006 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

Smartdog
Thanks for commenting.

posted by ThomasFranklin on January 3, 2006 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

Ben
I don't know...'The Hat' was in the yard. These are his stories.

posted by ThomasFranklin on January 3, 2006 at 4:44 PM | link to this | reply

Ben
How true a statment. Death and freedom are one.

posted by ThomasFranklin on January 3, 2006 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

Is this fiction???? You did quite a bit with only a few paragraphs.

Impressive!

I also wanted to say 'thanks' for the comment you left in my blog about Danny. You nailed his personality. I was kind of shocked.

posted by Passionflower on January 3, 2006 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

Thomas
Excellent work as always.  Prison tales always have gritty details

posted by smartdog_670 on January 3, 2006 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

The title of this story is arresting. The man could have thought he had a slim chance of breaking loose.

(B)

posted by A-and-B on January 3, 2006 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Congrats, you've identified the 2 men right.

(B)

posted by A-and-B on January 3, 2006 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

He made his choice. In death, he has his freedom.

(B)

posted by A-and-B on January 3, 2006 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply