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ebb--
I had to read this a couple of times.  It's certainly unconventional, whatever that means today, but it has substance.  I like it.

posted by Hemlocker on January 3, 2006 at 10:13 AM | link to this | reply

Ebb

I would bet that the challenge this poem presented to you was great. I read it four, maybe five times and I like it.

I scrolled down and read a few more of your works and enjoyed them all the same. You write well.

Then I clicked onto your nickname, being the curious man that I am, to see what other blogs that you may have.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Goodness, do you ever have the blogs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL

Thanks for stopping by The BellKeeper's Watch.

posted by bwFrampton on January 2, 2006 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

Avant
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.  It was fun to write.  Hard, though.

posted by Ebb.and.Flow on January 2, 2006 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

ebb and flow
Very catchy piece. It reads very well, especially done slowly. I like the way you did it word for word. Happy New Year to you.

posted by avant-garde on January 2, 2006 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

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