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It really warms my heart to see that people relate to my writings. Thanks for your remarks. I have enjoyed reading your blogs, too.
posted by
rafika
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January 9, 2006
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That picture...
And that poem were made for each other.
posted by
food4thought
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January 8, 2006
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Talk about a sensual poem!
It engaged my sense of touch/feeling. Well done. Also, your pictures compliment your poem so well.
posted by
word.smith
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January 6, 2006
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wow
I'll place you in my favourites
posted by
brisbane_artist
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January 4, 2006
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Rafika
Very beautiful and senusous!
posted by
jojostar
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January 3, 2006
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Thank you!
I sincerely appreciate everyone's comments about my writing. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and critique my work. I hope to take a look at yours soon too if I haven't already. Happy new year!
posted by
rafika
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January 2, 2006
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Welcome to Blogit
I especially liked "drenched by the gaudy beauty of the night."
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fionajean
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January 2, 2006
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This is a fine piece of pure magic--artistically rendered...
and artfully articulated--a sonorous and sensational interplay of images that entices but does not sate the appetite. I will linger longer over these words, and be back for yet more among the collection of poems you so generously share with us. Thank you.
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Ebb.and.Flow
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January 2, 2006
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you put so many of these lovelies up at once, I haven't caught up...
This is so wonderful. I've been missing someone from long ago, and this was a delicious read with him in mind. Tender and passionate...delicious and sad.
posted by
Temple
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January 2, 2006
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A very sensual expression:)
posted by
Meringue
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January 2, 2006
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Raf
A mellifluous reverie. Nicely done.
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
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January 1, 2006
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Rafika, very nice indeed!
Welcome to blogit. I used to work on Rittenhouse Sq.
I hope you' ll visit my Upe spanish blog often; languages are like sex --- use 'em or lose 'em!! ARGUS
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ARGUS
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January 1, 2006
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Well Done! :-)
posted by
cordwainer
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January 1, 2006
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Rafika,
The photo complements Night Magic so well (I didn't read the others yet, but I will). Such beautiful imagery, when it comes to sensual poetry, I like the subtle over the overt, and yours is that, subtly evoking images. I look forward to reading more.
posted by
Blanche.
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January 1, 2006
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That is lovely
The eager smile penetrates. The Muscat location helps. I don't know why but it does
posted by
Azur
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January 1, 2006
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Thanks
I appreciate your wonderful comments on my writing. Thank you for taking the time to explore my poems. To me, they are each like baby birds ready to take flight, so I post them here to let them spread their wings.
posted by
rafika
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January 1, 2006
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All or nothing
Wow!!! Magnificient!!!!
Once I started reading your poetry I had to read it all, now I have to sit in a tub of ice to put the fire out. Photography excellent!!
posted by
serioushelpneeded
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January 1, 2006
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You must be doing something right
because I needed a cold shower after Night Magic.
posted by
wislon
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January 1, 2006
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rafika
Overall, I am quite impressed with your poems. 'Retinal Burn' is nice with almost the same ending each line, meanwhile 'Soar' and 'The Night You Left Me' are very touching. Keep on the good job.
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StillStayEileenD
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January 1, 2006
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