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Fabulous
Great form, rhythm and rhyme.  Excellent management of language.  Lovely message.  Nice effort.

posted by rafika on January 20, 2006 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Marzieh

Great advice in the form of poetry.  It makes for a good New Year's resolution.

And a happy one to you  click

Melody

 

posted by CunningLinguist on December 30, 2005 at 7:07 PM | link to this | reply

marzieh
lovely

posted by MiaElla on December 30, 2005 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

Would we be parting or anchoring?

posted by Straightforward on December 28, 2005 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Good one.
I liked it... I need to take better care of my body I think. 

posted by Trevor_Cunnington on December 28, 2005 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

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