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Fiona Jean do you mean like this? (I'll post it properly later.)

Oh Dear

O woe!

Not as if I didn't know?

To the specialist

I have to go

and she's gunna

check me all over.

?

"So what?"

 you say

"are you so fragile

so whimpy

hey?"

"It's not that ,"

I reply

"I forgot to do the washing!"

!!

"I don't dig ,"

you quip

"Well I got no undies

and that's a flip

'cept the ol' ones

that aren't cool

She might think

that I am a fool?"

 Lion 

Ok Ok

I'll just deal with it!

 

 







posted by brisbane_artist on December 13, 2005 at 3:05 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Jo

I'm beginning to think that prayer may be the only way to lose weight now. I like the way you write poems about everyday problems. So many people think poetry has to be involved and flowery but some of the best poetry is sweet and simple and stuff ordinary people can relate to.

posted by fionajean on December 13, 2005 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Its fun try

ing though,

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on December 13, 2005 at 2:35 AM | link to this | reply

There is no easy way to flatten the stomach.

Congratulations, your close answer wins the day. All clicks are in here. Thanks for your persistent participation.

(A)

posted by A-and-B on December 13, 2005 at 2:26 AM | link to this | reply