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LOL Tapsel!
Thanks - I don't mind if you don't comment - but I really like it when you do.

posted by MerryAnne on November 18, 2005 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

MerryAnne, This was so good that I forgot to comment when I read it yesterday.  I just went off to vote.  Lol

posted by TAPS. on November 18, 2005 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

LOL Factor,
sorry - I didn't mean to spill your secret.  Please don't call the police.... again.... 

posted by MerryAnne on November 17, 2005 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

You have been peeping in my windows again, haven't you?
Really! It's bad enough that you do it, do you have to tell everyone what I am doing?

posted by FactorFiction on November 16, 2005 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks AJ

posted by MerryAnne on November 16, 2005 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

Great Flash Fiction!

Reading this, I could feel desperation--but I could also feel a dry-wit kind of humor thread running through it.

This felt very exaggerated and very real at the same time--and 100% excellent!

Kudos!
AJ

posted by Ainsley_Jo_Phillips on November 15, 2005 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

LOL Word
I hope that means you liked it!  lol....

posted by MerryAnne on November 14, 2005 at 5:05 PM | link to this | reply

Oh and I like that you got this done in so few words.
That's something I'm yet to master.

posted by word.smith on November 14, 2005 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my goodness, MerryAnne
I was so wound up thinking she was going to do something destructive that I forget all about the dishwasher.  I could have given myself a heart attack, or rather you might have given me one.

posted by word.smith on November 14, 2005 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

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