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Nicely done, hands of stone.
posted by
scriber
on October 21, 2005 at 7:10 AM
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Great work, MiaElla. I like something that makes me think and hunt for meanings. I haven't seen Cavendish used in this way before so I am on a search.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 20, 2005 at 10:24 AM
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Excellent ! So very good!
posted by
Original_Influence
on October 19, 2005 at 8:20 PM
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lovely imagery. i like the addition of tabacco stained, and that the last thing we learn is that he's stone. very simple, very vivid. nice tone, nice word choice, flows well.
thanks.
posted by
kellyrose
on October 19, 2005 at 5:13 PM
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great work
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 19, 2005 at 9:41 AM
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Very very nice!
posted by
Critter_and_Josh
on October 19, 2005 at 3:09 AM
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MiaElla
I think you write great poems, I just read many.
posted by
appleworks7
on October 18, 2005 at 1:16 PM
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very unique
posted by
lilaznthug85
on October 18, 2005 at 12:07 PM
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Ariala
Thanks! That means so much coming from you!
posted by
MiaElla
on October 18, 2005 at 11:55 AM
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Wow, well done and unique!
posted by
Ariala
on October 18, 2005 at 11:52 AM
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