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Joe
Thanks!  I'm glad you could feel they rhythm....I definitely had one in mind as I wrote it and that makes me feel good.

posted by Krisles on October 26, 2005 at 4:27 AM | link to this | reply

Krisles
Very distinctive composition. I don't blame you at all for reposting it!! As I read it, I could feel the rythm you were trying to convey.

posted by Joe_Love on October 23, 2005 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

I said it before, I'll say it again. Wow.
That's so great. You know that, right?

posted by strat on October 19, 2005 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

Lensman.....and that was after I did have hips!

posted by Krisles on October 18, 2005 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

Lensman
Glad you enjoyed my little story of the dance men and women often do.  And, I did have a Spanish dance routine in junior high....loved to get to stomp!...didn't really have much in the way of hips at the time, unfortunately.....sigh.... However, I did once take belly dancing....had zils, a veil and everything....private performances only, of course....it was great exercise!

posted by Krisles on October 18, 2005 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

Krisles

Haha...nobody can do this stuff quite like you can.  This kind of thing is all yours.  Lady of the dance.  I bet you'd be good at Spanish dancing.  Lord, those women know what to do with hips.  Now, I know this post was about more than simply hips and dancing.  There was that twist towards the end there.  I must have missed this the first time around.  Thanks for giving it a second chance 

posted by Lensman on October 18, 2005 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

Queen
Thanks, love.....we've all got that rhythm is my theory....and I knoooooow you've got it!

posted by Krisles on October 18, 2005 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

Kris
Okay...then that is what I am going to do! Now to figure out which one (that shouldn't take me more than a month to decide)

posted by Offy on October 18, 2005 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

I was mesmorized
the first time I read this and again..........the second time. Gawd damn woman you got rhythm!

posted by ALWAYSALOVER on October 18, 2005 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

Offbeat
I know very well what you mean, Sweet Tea!  And, I think it would not be a bad idea at all....seems to me like last time you did, it was a very enjoyable experiene....was it not?  Need to keep the head clear, though...

posted by Krisles on October 18, 2005 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply

Argus
Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it....it was a lot of fun to write.

posted by Krisles on October 18, 2005 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

Kris
Do you think I should get laid? I have been thinking maybe that is what is wrong with me, now this swish, swish, dip conjours up feelings down deep inside... ya know what I mean o wise woman??

posted by Offy on October 18, 2005 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

Kris, Very nice word picture!
Enjoyed reading it.   ARGUS

posted by ARGUS on October 18, 2005 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

You and me both :-)

posted by CunningLinguist on October 18, 2005 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Medusa
Those senses are what make us alive in this world.....and I bet your swish is a killer!  Especially when you've got that cleavage thing goin'.....(just don't dip too low with the V-neck....oops, is that my Mama talkin'?)

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

Timmy
Thank you, sweet man....I have missed you around here so much....again, welcome back!

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

JoJo
Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed.....I do believe all women have a swish....and that getting in touch with it, and comfortable with it is when we begin to really put ourselves out there into the world.

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

Cunning
Thank you sweet one(s)!  And I'm doing pretty well....shoulder still a challenge.....I love the idea of Melody swishin' around...dippin'....swishin'....

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

Shadow
Thanks!  And I bet you've got an incredible swish and dip, dancin' around that fire....I can just see you...you are definitely in touch with your swishin', woman!

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

SilverMoon7
Thank you....I'm glad you liked!

posted by Krisles on October 17, 2005 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Krisles...Swish, swish....I remember this..... Dip!!!!!!!
You are such a great romantic . You don't just touch one sense...You embrace them all!

posted by MedusaNextDoor on October 17, 2005 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

Kris
Just as good the second time around..........such wonderful visuals

posted by TIMMYTALES on October 17, 2005 at 4:33 PM | link to this | reply

Krisles

I'm so glad you reposted as I missed it the first time. Beautiful!

posted by jojostar on October 17, 2005 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

It looks as good in instant replay :-)
And it's just as true.  I hope you're doing well, Good Lady.

posted by CunningLinguist on October 17, 2005 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

Krisles,

Hey lovely woman! I remember the first post. Super terrific! Now I got to go practice swish and dip. Shadow

posted by Keshet on October 17, 2005 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful.  I'm glad you reposted! 

posted by SilverMoon7 on October 17, 2005 at 1:13 PM | link to this | reply