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subtle is good but that's not what I liked about it
A lot of poems are composed of a bunch of ideas lumped together, and ideas alone can get boring. Your poem was interesting because it took me to a specific place and time and allowed me not just to feel a little of what you felt but also see the picture you had in oyour head when you were writing it.
posted by
offThepath
on October 19, 2005 at 6:01 PM
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I really
enjoyed this poem. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
ALWAYSALOVER
on October 12, 2005 at 9:39 AM
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