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JanesOpinion...
...done already!
I like the AdWords model, but I need to spend more time with my keyword list.
It's knowing what to do first!
Thanks for the comment.
D
posted by
DamonLeigh
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October 17, 2005
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perhaps you should try advertising on Google.
Choose the right words to use (i.e. those most commonly used by average folk doing google searches) and you could get a lot of hits. Good luck.
posted by
JanesOpinion
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October 15, 2005
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fionajean...
...thank you.
D
posted by
DamonLeigh
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October 15, 2005
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Ca88andra...
...thanks, lovely.
D x
posted by
DamonLeigh
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October 15, 2005
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Hemlocker...
...thanks for the comment!
Succinct would be my preference, too, but longer = better according to the copywriting experts.
You confused me with your comment about not telling people the price. It is right there on the site, more than once, for people to see before they ever click the buy button.
Cheers!
D
posted by
DamonLeigh
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October 15, 2005
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I'm sorry about your
loss, Damon, and wish you good fortune in your enterprise. I'm no expert, but I'd try to make it more succinct (while still repeating the most important parts: and, at least in my opinion, it's not cricket not to tell people how much it costs until they register to buy. Hemlocker
posted by
Hemlocker
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October 14, 2005
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Good luck on the new business! Sorry to hear your sad news.
posted by
Ca88andra
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October 14, 2005
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Congrats on your DVD!
It's always sad when a talented person dies.
posted by
fionajean
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October 14, 2005
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Ah....
...so my cunning ruse worked, Mark!
Subliminal sexual undertones that only a...certain...clientele are able to pick up on.
C'mon - you love me really.
D
posted by
DamonLeigh
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October 13, 2005
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You damn Europeans....
You use "massive" and "seismic shift" in your sex-laced promotion. And "Big Boys". I've signed up for the next ten years.
Curse you, you dirty, dirty man.
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mark2556
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October 13, 2005
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Quirky...
...y'know, that's a damn fine idea right there.
I shall do this this very day!
Thank you!
D
posted by
DamonLeigh
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October 13, 2005
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Dylan...
...I admit, that did cross my mind, though twas not my intention, I assure you!
Baby isn't due for another ten weeks, but we've been assured that if s/he did decide to arrive now, it would probably work out fine.
Except we've bought nothing, done nothing and prepared nothing!
Thanks for popping in!
D
posted by
DamonLeigh
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October 13, 2005
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I didn't have time to read all of the sales copy, but what I did read wasn't that bad. I think you are following the format for things such as this, I would only say, is it possible to put an order link in both of the P.S.s--because people always read those and if that is the last thing they read, maybe if they had a way to click without scrolling back up?? Just a thought.
posted by
Julia.
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October 12, 2005
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Oh come on, you knew we were going to think you meant your baby was born!
Why do you tease us so? 
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Dylan24
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October 12, 2005
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