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In a yearling pace
Thanks Chuck; it's nice to be read and appreciated. It's especially nice to appreciate that it's been understood.
Raven Darke
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RavenDarke
on July 31, 2003 at 11:09 PM
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!st Page
Raven just read your entire first page---count me highly impressed. I'm writing fiction and having a hard time with eroticism, especially the sex act---in fact in my second draft I removed a long badly-done sex scene and replaced it with more tease!
Anticipations was just that---I envisioned firm body outlines, erect nipples visible through revealing fabric, and you left the reader wanting,
needing more. And
doesn't pay to think your poop is pure---I loved that. Baby you rock. Chuck
posted by
ega52
on July 31, 2003 at 6:54 PM
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mute explanations
Thanks for the praise, Pecan. I wanted to try and relate that event as is.
Raven Darke
posted by
RavenDarke
on July 30, 2003 at 8:06 PM
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wow.
nuff said.
posted by
CatLadyintheAttic
on July 30, 2003 at 9:52 AM
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