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In a yearling pace

Thanks Chuck; it's nice to be read and appreciated. It's especially nice to appreciate that it's been understood.

Raven Darke

posted by RavenDarke on July 31, 2003 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

!st Page

Raven just read your entire first page---count me highly impressed.  I'm writing fiction and having a hard time with eroticism, especially the sex act---in fact in my second draft I removed a long badly-done sex scene and replaced it with more tease!  Anticipations was just that---I envisioned firm body outlines, erect nipples visible through revealing fabric, and you left the reader wanting, needing more.  And doesn't pay to think your poop is pure---I loved that.  Baby you rock.  Chuck 

posted by ega52 on July 31, 2003 at 6:54 PM | link to this | reply

mute explanations

Thanks for the praise, Pecan. I wanted to try and relate that event as is.

Raven Darke

posted by RavenDarke on July 30, 2003 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

wow.

nuff said.

posted by Sheofthenuts on July 30, 2003 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply