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Mia,
Wow! Did I enjoy this poem? Yes! I loved it. It is a story in it's own right. Way to go -
red
posted by
redlunar
on October 11, 2005 at 10:03 AM
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mia
powerful! Made me think of Anne Bancroft in "Great Expectations"
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on October 8, 2005 at 4:07 PM
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That was awesome!
posted by
Holy_Grail
on October 6, 2005 at 7:12 PM
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Oh my goodness--this was an amazing poem!! I totally loved it--that poor woman, waiting for all eternity for what will never come.
posted by
Julia.
on October 6, 2005 at 7:09 PM
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well written poem...
keep up the good work:)
posted by
Marshallengraved
on October 6, 2005 at 1:22 PM
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Miaella...now that's very creative! I really liked the twist on this!
posted by
Masky
on October 5, 2005 at 9:36 PM
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oh, what a twist...
no happily ever after (sniff)
but a very clever poem! well done
posted by
littlemspickles
on October 5, 2005 at 3:47 PM
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No it was really good, don't apologize!
Lil hottie!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on October 4, 2005 at 8:05 PM
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JimsonWeed
Sorry I simply wanted to put a twist on a fairy tale....lol...yes, still friends...
posted by
MiaElla
on October 4, 2005 at 7:00 PM
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Hey! I resent that!
Not all men are assholes you know! I'm sorry you got hurt but I am so damn sick of women saying shit about men when all I see is women fucking over good men!
Umm... Nice poem by the way.. Still friends? :)
posted by
SomeoneElse
on October 4, 2005 at 6:13 PM
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