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MysticGmekeepr
Thank you. :)  Too bad the man I wrote it for will most likely never read it.  But I carry him with me just the same.

posted by Temple on October 8, 2005 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

temple

every girls heart will skip a beat with that

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 8, 2005 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

Michael
I read some of your poetry and I know you're feeling sort of confused about things at home.  I hope you sort it out.  That must be hard with everything else, too. Time will sort it out for you, when you're ready (even if you think you are ready now, you may not be).  That Lt. is fine and home now in the states, leaving the military next summer.  Our relationship didn't survive Iraq, but we are good friends.  We split the summer before this last one.  Just so you know, it was his decision.  I wouldn't have done it with him over there, although it was the right decision. He still writes here. :)  Thanks for asking.

posted by Temple on October 2, 2005 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

HELLO TEMPLE, how are you.  You know, I kinda wish that one day, just once, I could bumo into someone ( a woman) who would tell me these same words...hehehe.  Whatever happened to that leiutenant who was in baghdad?

posted by michael_pilarte on October 2, 2005 at 1:31 AM | link to this | reply

smartdog!
I've missed you!  Where have you been?  Yeah, sometimes we gotta get rid of that thinkin' business and just go for it. ;)  I'm so glad to see you.  I was hoping you were okay, too. I sent a little email from here just to check up on you....I think I owed you an email?  I get behind.  I'm doing well...about to post in Gidget on that regard. 

posted by Temple on September 30, 2005 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

Symphony

posted by Temple on September 30, 2005 at 4:02 PM | link to this | reply

Hi temp :)

"I would throw away all the smart decisions just to kiss you." Very nice close.  I have missed your lines.  I hope you are well.

-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on September 30, 2005 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

so beautifully done....but very sad....and heartfelt

posted by _Symphony_ on September 30, 2005 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala, that's so true.

I know that I will always love, in some way, those I've loved in the past.  They always will be a little part of me.  But, I think everyone has that one person that stays put in our heart no matter time or circumstance.  Even if it's not meant to be.  I don't regret one minute though.  Not one.

posted by Temple on September 29, 2005 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Libby
Yes, I suppose it may be a reality.  I've been very happy and totally in love with other men, and I'm sure I will be in love again.  I had to let this one go, but up until now, he really was the love of my life and from time to time I just miss him like it was yesterday.  It was right, but sometimes I want to say....fuck what's right.  I think you feel me on this.    I just realized that somehow when you changed your name I never put you in my favorites....I'm sorry.  I haven't been reading much of anything, but I will remedy at least the favorites part now.

posted by Temple on September 29, 2005 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

Masky, you can be greedy....it's a compliment. :)
My poetry is funny, it comes in big bunches, then sometimes not for a while.  All I can say is I have about a year's worth here so if you are jonesing and I'm stuck you can read back a bit if you'd like.  I'm sort of stuck now, as you can see.  Longing....yes, it sneaks up on me sometimes for this man.  Thanks for reading and for waiting.

posted by Temple on September 29, 2005 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

so sad and beautiful...love never ends, even when it's over.

posted by Ariala on September 29, 2005 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

So sad, so beautiful, and such a reality for many people. 

posted by Holy_Grail on September 29, 2005 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

Temple

Beautiful yet sad is the longing. 

I've been so greedy, checking to see if you were finally done with your "laundry".  Glad you posted! 

posted by Masky on September 29, 2005 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply