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You have created something very good.
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 19, 2005 at 11:35 AM
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Alf
I really like this one, too! The image of steel reminds me of the Viking swords you often alluded to in your previous work. This poem communicates a lot of strength!
posted by
Georgia
on September 17, 2005 at 9:15 AM
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Thanks Offbeats...
Back when I was an avid blogger I got read more, I guess I am spoiled. I have to earn my place all over again.
posted by
A_Norseman
on September 15, 2005 at 8:06 PM
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Alf
Don't be lonely...your shaping your future here. Wish I could put it into words like that!!
posted by
Offy
on September 15, 2005 at 7:35 PM
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What a lonely little poem I am :(
posted by
A_Norseman
on September 15, 2005 at 7:20 PM
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Thanks Quirky!!
posted by
A_Norseman
on September 15, 2005 at 10:34 AM
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That is an interesting and unique metaphor--and a really great poem!!
I'm happy to see you shaping some poetic steel after a long absence.
posted by
Julia.
on September 15, 2005 at 10:31 AM
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