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very lovely little poem." Casted a rippling kaleidoscope" You might want to change casted to cast, 
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on September 18, 2005 at 11:26 AM
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Than you
That was beautiful.....
posted by
Digitalink
on September 16, 2005 at 1:46 PM
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Hey Mia!!
That was so delightfully descriptive..Thanks..Schree` :-)
posted by
Schree
on September 15, 2005 at 2:21 AM
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MiaElla, you're very good with imagery.
I can really see your poem. The silhouette dancing, the kaleidoscope of colors, the dress fanned out like a bell. It's visually arousing, with romance and music in the air....
posted by
Adaman
on September 14, 2005 at 10:59 PM
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that was awesome--very romantic!
posted by
Julia.
on September 13, 2005 at 10:28 PM
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Mmmmmmm
posted by
SomeoneElse
on September 13, 2005 at 6:22 PM
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beautiful poem
posted by
Marshallengraved
on September 13, 2005 at 10:28 AM
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Lovely, MiaElla. I felt like a voyeur.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 13, 2005 at 10:04 AM
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MiaElla--a relaxing and desirable scene plays.
posted by
scriber
on September 13, 2005 at 7:42 AM
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Mia..this is so romantic...
made me think of Gone with the Wind when romance was a constant.
posted by
Original_Influence
on September 12, 2005 at 4:25 PM
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Mia, darling, I've missed you so much...how have you been? I hope you are
well. I've been following your wonderful poetry (but been too antisocial to make my presence felt.) I've been a bit aloof, but I've started my own indie blog at http://www.yioni.com check it out sometime... see ya...
posted by
void-is
on September 12, 2005 at 2:14 PM
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