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mia
very lovely little poem." Casted a rippling kaleidoscope" You might want to change casted to cast, 

posted by
MysticGmekeepr
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September 18, 2005
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Than you
That was beautiful.....
posted by
Digitalink
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September 16, 2005
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Hey Mia!!
That was so delightfully descriptive..Thanks..Schree` :-)
posted by
Schree
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September 15, 2005
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MiaElla, you're very good with imagery.
I can really see your poem. The silhouette dancing, the kaleidoscope of colors, the dress fanned out like a bell. It's visually arousing, with romance and music in the air....
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Adaman
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September 14, 2005
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that was awesome--very romantic!
posted by
Julia.
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September 13, 2005
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Mmmmmmm
posted by
LostInLife
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September 13, 2005
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beautiful poem
posted by
Marshallengraved
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September 13, 2005
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Lovely, MiaElla. I felt like a voyeur.
posted by
TAPS.
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September 13, 2005
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MiaElla--a relaxing and desirable scene plays.
posted by
scriber
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September 13, 2005
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Mia..this is so romantic...
made me think of Gone with the Wind when romance was a constant.
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Original_Influence
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September 12, 2005
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Mia, darling, I've missed you so much...how have you been? I hope you are
well. I've been following your wonderful poetry (but been too antisocial to make my presence felt.) I've been a bit aloof, but I've started my own indie blog at http://www.yioni.com check it out sometime... see ya...
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void-is
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September 12, 2005
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