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mia

great! You write such lovely poems. My eyes followed her just like the captains. Nice read!

posted by MysticGmekeepr on September 18, 2005 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Nicley done...

posted by _Symphony_ on September 12, 2005 at 3:59 AM | link to this | reply

Your poetry is so beautiful.

Definitely not for cavemen. It is some of my favorite reading on the whole internet.

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on September 11, 2005 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Mia!!

OOhh This is soo wonderful..Great poem!!! It's romantic to the core..Schree`

posted by Schree on September 11, 2005 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

I can't help wallow in the poetic skills of bloggers and you're one of them

posted by Straightforward on September 11, 2005 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

I love the words: young moonlight. And I can hear the rhythmic drumming

and can feel the strength of the captain.  Beautiful words and delicate, tasteful image of lovemaking.

posted by Adaman on September 9, 2005 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

Something Excellent I assure you!

 

posted by LostInLife on September 9, 2005 at 12:29 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Mia!!!

Hi Mia!!! This poem is wonderfully descriptive..Great work!! Schree`    

posted by Schree on September 9, 2005 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

A tryst for two and hot enough.

posted by scriber on September 9, 2005 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply

Jimson

Something 'good I hope.

posted by MiaElla on September 9, 2005 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Hmmmmmm...

You are something I must say!

posted by LostInLife on September 9, 2005 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply