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mia
great! You write such lovely poems. My eyes followed her just like the captains. Nice read!
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on September 18, 2005 at 11:29 AM
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Nicley done...
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 12, 2005 at 3:59 AM
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Your poetry is so beautiful.
Definitely not for cavemen. It is some of my favorite reading on the whole internet.
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on September 11, 2005 at 5:16 PM
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Hi Mia!!
OOhh This is soo wonderful..Great poem!!! It's romantic to the core..Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 11, 2005 at 2:15 PM
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I can't help wallow in the poetic skills of bloggers and you're one of them
posted by
Straightforward
on September 11, 2005 at 12:54 AM
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I love the words: young moonlight. And I can hear the rhythmic drumming
and can feel the strength of the captain. Beautiful words and delicate, tasteful image of lovemaking.
posted by
Adaman
on September 9, 2005 at 10:35 PM
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Something Excellent I assure you!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on September 9, 2005 at 12:29 PM
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Hi Mia!!!
Hi Mia!!! This poem is wonderfully descriptive..Great work!! Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 9, 2005 at 11:25 AM
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A tryst for two and hot enough.
posted by
scriber
on September 9, 2005 at 11:07 AM
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Jimson
Something 'good I hope.
posted by
MiaElla
on September 9, 2005 at 9:25 AM
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Hmmmmmm...
You are something I must say!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on September 9, 2005 at 9:23 AM
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