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But it's innocently beautiful.

posted by Adaman on September 18, 2005 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

MiaElla
I'm afraid, if I'd have met you then...Riel wouldn't be.. :)

posted by SomeoneElse on September 2, 2005 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

JimsonWeed

Well when I was 17 I still believed guys were still deserving of such admiration and dedication...lol

Damn, you should have met me then....lol

posted by MiaElla on September 2, 2005 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

I thought it was nice!
Nothing cheesy at all!! I only wish I'd have been the target of such a poem!

posted by SomeoneElse on September 2, 2005 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply