Comments on Chapter 16 - What's The Matter With Our Baby?

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MsVision,
Thanks for reading and for your comments. You'll find out what's wrong with the baby in this next installment.

posted by RAME on August 30, 2005 at 2:00 PM | link to this | reply

Your character seems to be in a precarious situation, keeping the peace with her husband. What's wrong with bub?

posted by MsVision on August 29, 2005 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

It sounds as if...

...Melody might have an intestinal blockage.

Please publish the next chapter a.s.a.p.

Hugs!
AJ

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posted by Ainsley_Jo_Phillips on August 29, 2005 at 3:02 AM | link to this | reply