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...but I'll also make people aware of your novel.

This morning, I designed a number of sig-blocks that I can easily paste into place when I leave comments, and this is the one I designed for you!

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AJ

                                         
Life With A Sociopath

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posted by Ainsley_Jo_Phillips on August 25, 2005 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

Ainsley,

Thanks for reading and for your comments.   You're right.  Gene is to illustrate the type girl Tiffany is.  Your helpful comments are all appreciated very much.  Please keep them coming.   

posted by RAME on August 24, 2005 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

Great Story!!!

As you said, it's a diamond-in-the-rough (that is, needs some smoothing out here and there), but it's still wonderfully-told and attention-keeping.

One thing I'm wondering about is the guy at the first of the story named Gene.

Will he figure into the story again later? or Is he kinda like Chuck Cunningham on Happy Days who just kinda evaporated without explanation?

One thing I can see is how he helps to paint the picture of what a nice girl Tiffany is--almost nice-to-a-fault, making her a mark for abusive, control-freak men.

I'll be very interested in seeing how this story develops!

Write On!
AJ

posted by Ainsley_Jo_Phillips on August 24, 2005 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply

Oops! I'm absolutely NOT going to read this, because...

...I've, obviously, bumped into another novel and want to start at the beginning and work my way back here.

After I've finished Chapter 14, it will be time to read this!

Will leave you a rose at each chapter I finish up until then.

Write On!
AJ
 
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posted by Ainsley_Jo_Phillips on August 24, 2005 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply