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Good job, Kris.........

I like it.  

posted by MaggieMae on August 16, 2005 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky
Thank you! I appreciate that....I enjoyed writing it....sitting on my porch, just sorta flowed...

posted by Krisles on August 12, 2005 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Wiley
Oh, you sweet man....no, we can be in both!

posted by Krisles on August 12, 2005 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Wiley
Oh, you sweet man....no, we can be in both!

posted by Krisles on August 12, 2005 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

wonderful, lighthearted poem---it really sings!

posted by Julia. on August 12, 2005 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

Krisles
Whoa there girl, awright awready, let's fall in like, sheesh. Do I gotta fall out of love with y'allto fall in like?

posted by WileyJohn on August 12, 2005 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply