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this is a poem all by itself
Does death excite you?
A door to run through?
Without due deliberation
no interest will accrue…
Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
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August 13, 2005
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I just want you to know that I have read some of your work. Go deeper if you can. Youare on a good track
Fred
posted by
shoie
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August 13, 2005
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The_ebb_tide, There is something special about each stanza. At first, I did not want to leave the lion but after I moved on, I found that in a way, he went with me.
posted by
TAPS.
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August 13, 2005
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ebb tide
absolutely perfect, beginning to end. what a ride. Ah the power of words to do magic. THanks!
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
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August 12, 2005
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i loved it
posted by
Vanidad
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August 12, 2005
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thank you... I too appreciate the tempo in the unity
and thank you for your praise... I enjoyed writing this one.
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
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August 12, 2005
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ebb tide
each stanza could stand on it's on...there is a tempo to the unity though
posted by
MiaElla
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August 12, 2005
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this is excellent WOW!!!!
posted by
mcbreeze
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August 12, 2005
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