Comments on Johnnie's heartbreak

Go to Songs for my movie ~Let me be the Muse that AmusesAdd a commentGo to Johnnie's heartbreak

Passionflower
Honey, I have been blogging almost everyday this week!!! What are you talking about? Love, Vib

posted by Vibrance on August 13, 2005 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

How come you haven't written anything lately??
Too busy?

posted by Passionflower on August 13, 2005 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

you are very talented. this one is beautiful. i 've definitely felt like that. actually, i've felt like that of a lot, of late

posted by Vanidad on August 12, 2005 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

strong song.... built with finesse...
tender crescendoes with more drawn from less.

posted by Ebb.and.Flow on August 12, 2005 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

roses and stuff.
Tx for the roses. A comment would be great too. I really want to hear your comments!!! Love, Vib

posted by Vibrance on August 11, 2005 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

posted by daisysface on August 11, 2005 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RedHeadedGypsy on August 10, 2005 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

PhyllisTale - thank you so much- It is one of my favorite piece.
I need to write something news. Love, Vib

posted by Vibrance on August 10, 2005 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

This has a great rhythm, great movement. And I relate. You are very very talented! I am jealous!

posted by PhillysTales on August 10, 2005 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

Sliderr
resonnance is a good word. One that I appreciate as a compliment when songwriting. Love, Vib

posted by Vibrance on August 10, 2005 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

Some praise
I liked this post, it had good resonance.

Sliderrr.

posted by Sliderrr on August 9, 2005 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

Passionflower
yes, repetition is for singing. It doesn't always work for poetry though. The Waterboys could sing this one, right?

posted by Vibrance on August 9, 2005 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

I see lots of anguish and torment here...effective use of the repetitions

 

posted by Passionflower on August 9, 2005 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

When a person is depressed or heartbroken, the whole world looks bad to them.

Ben.

posted by A-and-B on August 9, 2005 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

I use the repetition because
it is meant to be a song.

posted by Vibrance on August 9, 2005 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

Vibrance,
this is a very good poem--I like the way you have used repetition of certain words, and also repeating lines.

posted by Julia. on August 9, 2005 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you for the kind words.

posted by Vibrance on August 9, 2005 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

This is beautiful!!!

posted by Bel_ on August 9, 2005 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

Vib--really like the way this starts, first four lines
set the tone.  Sweet baby down by the waterfront.

posted by scriber on August 9, 2005 at 2:28 PM | link to this | reply