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love it!

posted by littlemspickles on August 7, 2005 at 2:26 AM | link to this | reply

Take care

posted by _Symphony_ on August 5, 2005 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Mia, if I didn't know better....

I'd wonder if this was first hand. ;)  That's good writing.

posted by Temple on August 5, 2005 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

MiaElla..

Very nice! I could only dream of writing like that! Sh** I can't rhyme what am I saying...:) Good job!

posted by LostInLife on August 5, 2005 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

Very sweetly sensual MiaElla

posted by katray4 on August 4, 2005 at 3:20 PM | link to this | reply

Elegantly romantic

Well, you're now the first member on my "blog list". I'm not sure I've read poetry as good as this in classes!

posted by Jojapo on August 4, 2005 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

Krisles

Thanks!

posted by MiaElla on August 4, 2005 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

MiaElla

Very, very nice....I loved the feel of this.

posted by Krisles on August 4, 2005 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky,

That's a good idea =)

posted by MiaElla on August 4, 2005 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

Mia--

I know what you mean--I quit posting in my poetry blog and now post a poem in my others blogs once in awhile.

posted by Julia. on August 4, 2005 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

Mia--now for a cuppa coffee and smiles.

posted by scriber on August 3, 2005 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

mystic

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.

posted by MiaElla on August 3, 2005 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky

Thanks...it's hard to write poetry when I think no one is reading it...lol

posted by MiaElla on August 3, 2005 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

wonderful...very powerful lines, and great imagery, nice use of sensuality

posted by MysticGmekeepr on August 3, 2005 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

This is so beautiful and romantic. I esp. like the sounds in this line:

Draws me to the light of day

Like a moth to the moon

posted by Julia. on August 3, 2005 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply