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Thank you all for the

wonderful comments! And WhiteJedi, you are perceptive, indeed.  I wrote this poem with my first-born child (a daughter) in mind.

Thanks again,

FR

posted by freerain on July 7, 2005 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

I liked the way you personified the lily.  She becomes a strong individual through your words.  Good job.

posted by WhiteJedi on July 6, 2005 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely lovely!

posted by Original_Influence on July 5, 2005 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

Free

lovely gifts...the lily to you, the poem to us

posted by MysticGmekeepr on July 5, 2005 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

Come visit under the shadetree

And sit a spell with me. For here I will tell you Of things that might still be.

posted by stpwriter1 on July 5, 2005 at 4:02 AM | link to this | reply

How very lovely

posted by stpwriter1 on July 5, 2005 at 4:01 AM | link to this | reply

beautifully written..... lovely word flow. :)

posted by mmm-w on July 4, 2005 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply