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I liked the following lines:

"Bring me water for my feet; bring me wine to sip this evening." Lyrical, and not in need of rhyme- -M

posted by MaxWest on July 8, 2005 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

today i have had the rare priviledge of simply fanning through the pages of this community. getting to read so many writers.

it is in this way that i found your blog.

it became an instant favorite and this poem was the highlight of my hours here. i loved it. i long to be that girl... toes in the water, wine at my lips..... what a dream to have.

thank you for spreading such exquisite beauty so simply put and naturally.

posted by mmm-w on July 3, 2005 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

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