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After the comment you left for me, I feel I can't do justice to your poem! But I did enjoy it, the emotion behind the words reached out to me.
posted by
Ca88andra
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July 2, 2005
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Ebb
nicely woven feeling and word
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
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July 2, 2005
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ebb tide, I think I was just writing about this feeling. You just have to
live life and let others find their wings. My kids are gone for the summer or whatever, and I just have to allow them to strengthen their independence, other-dependence or whatever its going to be, and then let the warning signs guide further action. Nice meter too!
posted by
kingmi
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July 2, 2005
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