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very nice
good close (something I obsess about in poetry), and this had a very tight feel to it, like it was right near me, not something I'm watching from afar. Very nice.
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on June 20, 2005 at 8:31 PM
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Beautiful and painful...
posted by
jimmy68
on June 20, 2005 at 2:12 PM
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wow
nicley done
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2005 at 7:03 AM
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