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"...stage of skin"
Creative! I like the direction the sonnet II is going! 
posted by
behindamask
on June 22, 2005 at 9:19 AM
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I smile! I laugh! You grin! We sin for fun!
The smoke soon clears. The music plays. You cry.
Later, after many drinks, you give in.
I wander, I reach, and I touch. You too tired to run.
Your flesh trembles with just my reaching,
fear and longing fight for supremecy on this stage of skin.
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on June 22, 2005 at 9:03 AM
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...on with the sonnet game II
I smile! I laugh! You grin! We sin for fun! The smoke soon clears. The music plays. You cry.
Later, after many drinks, you give in.
I ache! You crave! I taste! You gave that look!
The tears subside. You trust in me. I stir.
Laughter, underneath satin sheets, a canvas.
posted by
behindamask
on June 20, 2005 at 12:38 PM
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its very..
da dah...da dah......dah dahhh......
I like it. WOuld be a great hook for a song.
posted by
Hammock_Noweilz
on June 16, 2005 at 3:55 AM
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i didnt bother to read what the whole game thing was about...
but I like what I read! Lol
I hope that you've got air-conditioning in the school all summer... you seem to have few complaints with where you are right now. Sometimes, uneventful periods are a blessing.
I've been doing great lately. I quit smoking almost 3 months ago, I've been staying sober... AND staying away from my not-so-sober friends. (It's been hard, but I've managed to fill my time sitting at home)
I'm starting college in less than two weeks... FINALLY... I wasn't able to start until now due to my continued lack of a license... of course, that will change on July 14th, (THANK GOD!)
Well, that's most of the good stuff. I'll be blogging about my life just plenty though, so tune in whenever you like. I'll be sure to keep checking in on you as well.
Blog on!
~Dew~
posted by
PoeticHoneyDew
on June 16, 2005 at 1:27 AM
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