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very special..........beautiful

posted by michael_pilarte on June 17, 2005 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

littlems

thank you so much....I wrote it for my best friend, and now when I call she answers the phone, "hi best poem writer in the world..." (she's, of course, biased) she couldn't believe I would write it for her...makes me want to write a million...:)

posted by Temple on June 12, 2005 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

that's beautiful temple...

posted by littlemspickles on June 12, 2005 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Jinjabelle

Welcome. Thank you for reading and commenting, as well as for such a lovely comment. :)

posted by Temple on June 11, 2005 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

You have a wonderful way with words

I especially like the last lines, "and love me, even when clouds fill my eyes" - great imagery and metaphor.

posted by Jinjabelle on June 11, 2005 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks very much Saul....

Me, too on that painting....the artist was only like 16 or something at the time I think. I love the feeling of it. :)

posted by Temple on June 10, 2005 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, and I love that painting, "Blue Duo".

posted by saul_relative on June 10, 2005 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

Nicely done, Temple.

posted by saul_relative on June 10, 2005 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

MaxWest

The moon never fails to inspire, in love and loss. No? ;)

posted by Temple on June 10, 2005 at 1:18 AM | link to this | reply

Cass, the moon is a wicked temptress.

So beautiful, yet always out of reach. Anything by moonlight can seem better. :)

posted by Temple on June 10, 2005 at 1:17 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony

You just can't beat "ahhhh" as a response. It's what I was feeling a bit. Thanks, sweetheart.

posted by Temple on June 10, 2005 at 1:16 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Jimmy...

But I keep telling you that you're biased. ;)

posted by Temple on June 10, 2005 at 1:15 AM | link to this | reply

Nice

Like this, the sentiment reminds me of a similar poem I wrote a couple years back, called "Far Away With Her." I think I'll post it on my Blog, in honor of this feeling -M

posted by MaxWest on June 8, 2005 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

I love the moon and dancing in the moonlight is one of my fav things...

posted by Ca88andra on June 7, 2005 at 3:29 AM | link to this | reply

ahhh this is beautifully written

posted by _Symphony_ on June 6, 2005 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

Very good pretty girl...

I keep telling you how good you are, and so do all these other people here...never doubt...

posted by jimmy68 on June 6, 2005 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Ms. N

Ah yes, look at me waltzing.... ;) Thank you so much. Sorry not to be around more, trying to make so much happen on the "outside" -- (always sounds like prison...lol...). It's nice to be missed, and that is a sweet thing to say. :)

I'm glad you liked it.

posted by Temple on June 6, 2005 at 5:22 AM | link to this | reply

Hammock

Thank you!

posted by Temple on June 6, 2005 at 5:20 AM | link to this | reply

Krisles

Yes, it is a universal thought...I always thought it was comforting when you miss someone. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. :)