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This poem reminds me of a country song called...

In My Daughter's Eyes

posted by Ainsley_Jo_Phillips on September 13, 2005 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

I loved this!  Thank you for sharing it....

~Mama.Dragonfly487

posted by Mama.Dragonfly on July 2, 2005 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Taps!

Good to see you!

posted by MerryAnne on June 6, 2005 at 11:06 AM | link to this | reply

thank you smartdog.

I'm glad you liked it - I kinda started with the last line.

posted by MerryAnne on June 6, 2005 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

MerryAnne - What a great poem.  Loved it.

posted by TAPS. on June 6, 2005 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

Nice finish

I like this one - last line is nice.

posted by smartdog_670 on June 5, 2005 at 6:37 AM | link to this | reply

Hey, thanks Offbeat!

posted by MerryAnne on June 1, 2005 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

MerryA

The scent of a baby can cure all...Good job!

posted by Offy on June 1, 2005 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

That's okay Mer...

..you are awfully good! Go ahead..swell up! ;)

posted by ginnieb on June 1, 2005 at 3:15 PM | link to this | reply

and ginnie...

if you keep this up I'll get a swelled head! :-)

posted by MerryAnne on June 1, 2005 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

Ginnie,

to start with, I'm not much of a poet. But there are some great poets here. I think you should give it a try.

posted by MerryAnne on June 1, 2005 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmm....

...I don't think I'm much of a poet..not after reading yours that's for sure! :)

posted by ginnieb on June 1, 2005 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

Why not ginnie?

maybe you'll get back into it.

posted by MerryAnne on June 1, 2005 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply

Well that's better than none at all MA!

I haven't written a poem since I was about 15...still have a book full..I should post some...LOL!

posted by ginnieb on June 1, 2005 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

lol don't get used to it Ginnie...

I only write one poem a month.... maybe. Thanks for reading.

posted by MerryAnne on June 1, 2005 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

Okay you've done it MerryAnne!

I was never much on poetry..you are changing my mind. This is so sweet..so touching..it evokes feeling..I love it.

posted by ginnieb on June 1, 2005 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply