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zentropa - I usually do that too, however its true that a catchy title and the first two lines of a story are about all a reader will read if they are skimming.

posted by Ca88andra on May 24, 2005 at 3:24 AM | link to this | reply

Spitfire - I was thinking that, but I couldn't come up with full posts for any of them at the time. As for the chicken, well I hope it doesn't want to adopt me. I'm so not a pet person.

posted by Ca88andra on May 24, 2005 at 3:23 AM | link to this | reply

wordsmith - exactly! I've sometimes been disappointed when the story didn't match the promise of the title.

posted by Ca88andra on May 24, 2005 at 3:22 AM | link to this | reply

katray - OK, I want to know about the llama!

posted by Ca88andra on May 24, 2005 at 3:21 AM | link to this | reply

Tapsel - strangely enough, I haven't seen the chicken again. If I didn't have a witness I would think I had been seeing things.

posted by Ca88andra on May 24, 2005 at 3:20 AM | link to this | reply

Original - I'll have to look for your list.

posted by Ca88andra on May 24, 2005 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Symphony!

posted by Ca88andra on May 24, 2005 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra,
I usually only go for a title that actually describes what's in my entry. I figure that if the entry is interesting enough, then it will draw people in accordingly by its description in the title.

posted by zentropa on May 23, 2005 at 11:33 PM | link to this | reply

Cass,
Ya should have used those in 3 different posts! That would be 2 extra titles you wouldn't have to think up! Hehe. Those are very funny! Maybe that chicken wanted to come in and meet you. Ya know, just like how cats adopt their people?

posted by SpitFire70 on May 22, 2005 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

It's a fact that great titles sell.

posted by word.smith on May 22, 2005 at 3:59 PM | link to this | reply

Lol, great title Ca88andra

 And post! Now that you mention it - "Why You Should Never Whistle to Summon a Llama!!"

I may write a shortie later explaining why, hehe..

posted by katray4 on May 22, 2005 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra - you drew me in with the chicken one.

posted by TAPS. on May 22, 2005 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

LOL....I'll have to start my own list and see!

posted by Original_Influence on May 22, 2005 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

LOL....great titles

posted by _Symphony_ on May 22, 2005 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

Lol Temple! Yes, that counts. You should be writing it all down, but I know what its like. All of us should be doing this, that or the other, but rarely do. You must have goldfields of stories in your head and one day they will come back to you.

posted by Ca88andra on May 22, 2005 at 3:46 AM | link to this | reply

Of course, I can never remember with my memory all messed up.
But, I remember saying, at least twice to Heidi and/or Jimmy this week....no one has ever said THAT sentence before!  In my life, there could be millions...the weirdest stuff happens to me.  In fact, my friends that have known me for a long time sort of make fun of the fact that I can say weird stuff like that.  I'll have to write some down and tell you.  I can tell you that I dreamed about a spider that turned into lettuce or grass and then Petie just snapped him up, legs dangling out of his mouth, and looked at me like....I got your back, Mom.  The spider was kind of a cartoon by that point, not icky, and trying to be bad ass like before Petie got him.  Does that count?  ...lol...

posted by Temple on May 22, 2005 at 3:32 AM | link to this | reply

May, sometimes these things just flash across my brain and sometimes I couldn't think of anything to save my life!

posted by Ca88andra on May 22, 2005 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

Funny isn't it but the headline or catchy title follows for me or doesn't arrive at all.

posted by Azur on May 22, 2005 at 3:17 AM | link to this | reply

lol muser! I love that story. I forgot to mention I was glad I had a friend staying here for the chicken incident. I bet no-one would have believed me if I didn't have a witness.

posted by Ca88andra on May 21, 2005 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

kingmi - thank you! I bet you could find lots of titles at school.

posted by Ca88andra on May 21, 2005 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

ginnie - I've thought about it, but I guess I have to get my other writing ideas out of the way first.

posted by Ca88andra on May 21, 2005 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

mary - I bet if you thought about it, you could come up with some! Thanks for reading.

posted by Ca88andra on May 21, 2005 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

Excuse me, ma'am...there's a lizard in the avocados!
I have to to touch, squeeze, press...produce at the grocery store. Last week, I was going through a pile of avocados looking for that perfect one, when a small green lizard leaped out of the pile. I jumped back and let out a little eeek. The woman beside me didn't see what happened, so I, redfaced, told her..."ma'am, there's a lizard in the avocados." She actually rolled her eyes at me, and walked away!. Love this post...you have a wonderful style.

posted by muser on May 21, 2005 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88i, Cannot top these!  Love ya'!

posted by kingmi on May 21, 2005 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

Geesh Cass...
..have to think on that one but I love yours!! A children's book based on your last title would be great..in fact a children's book based on all those three..I'll bet you could incorporate them all! Seriously!

posted by ginnieb on May 21, 2005 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

Beats me, Ca88, I'm not the one to ask, but I read you just the same.

posted by Blanche. on May 21, 2005 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

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