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I love this, kingmi.   Just got back on after two weeks off line.   I want to go back and read the previous ones.

posted by TAPS. on May 14, 2005 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

Flightpath, I will revise my intentions.  I will make each child who has a comment directed to them, sit at my computer at the teacher destk, and return a comment.  I will show them how to click the comments.  Otherwise I'm not letting them get too cosy with the Blogit!  Afraid they might run into some unsavory characters covered in butter, or whatever!

posted by kingmi on May 14, 2005 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Sassy, You are right.  He is 6th grade, but a learner of English. I will have him return to it again for some revision. 

posted by kingmi on May 14, 2005 at 11:23 AM | link to this | reply

Scott P. - A Jeep would be good, even in Florida, if you've studied that State and know where to travel.

posted by reasons on May 13, 2005 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

He needs to get spell check
I am not sure of the student's age, but this paper could use some serious work if he is anything higher then sixth grade.

posted by Sherri_G on May 13, 2005 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply