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Love's First Sight
Sweet and romantic... - Light
posted by
Lightdancing
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May 15, 2005
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posted by
Ariala
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May 12, 2005
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Ariala, thoughts of you are on auto pilot for me as well. I am off to
meditate now and will be there to comfort your soul and surround you with a glorious blanket of love very soon. Sleep well my sweet.

posted by
doigotta
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May 12, 2005
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You don't have to say "please." It's automatic...
posted by
Ariala
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May 12, 2005
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Good night my sweet, try to get some sleep. Please think of me and know
my light shines for both of us when your world seems dark.


posted by
doigotta
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May 12, 2005
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I love the way you feel and how you express it...I may be going to bed
soon, so thought I'd say goodnight to you...tomorrow is my mom's funeral. When I feel the despair hit again, I will visualize this poem and conjure up a cyber hug from my soulmate. Thank you.
posted by
Ariala
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May 12, 2005
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Whoa...I am speechless.
posted by
Ariala
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May 12, 2005
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Thank you my sweet, I have been thinking of you all day, just like in
my poem I knew it was your soul that called me without even reading your work, it was soul love at first sight. I just knew you were my soulmate and it was then that I believed in love at first sight.
posted by
doigotta
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May 12, 2005
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Well, I would be lying if I said I wasn't still very sad, but I'm hanging
in there...reread your poem and found joy in the dream of such a moment. Wonderful work.
posted by
Ariala
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May 12, 2005
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7:21 PM
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Hello my soulmate, how is your heart tonight?
posted by
doigotta
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May 12, 2005
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6:58 PM
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Wow, what a beautiful poem, soulmate...
posted by
Ariala
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May 12, 2005
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6:52 PM
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Ann, thank you for reading and also enjoying the poem.
posted by
doigotta
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May 12, 2005
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6:32 PM
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doigotta
This is so beautiful. Why hasn't anyone commented? I prefer my nights indoors. I'm mosquito-shy. ;-)
Ann.
posted by
A-and-B
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May 12, 2005
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6:30 PM
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